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OCTPOWRIMO – # 5 – O MY LOVE

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OCTPOWRIMO – # 5 – O MY LOVEIMG_20150928_151453

For OctPoWriMo day # 5, we were to try to capture a feeling…to show, not tell. I’ve tried a couple, but first a definition or two.

Three words I’ve used have to do with music.

Crescendo – a gradual increase in volume

Diminuendo – a diminishing, or decrescendo, of volume

Dal Niente – From nothing…gradually increasing out of silence

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This first poem form is called Shadorma. I just heard about it yesterday after reading about it on another poet’s blog. (thank you Greg Wolford) His blog can be found here . Shadorma is believed to have originated in Spain, but that is questionable, from what I read about it. It is however, widely used nowadays. The form it takes is using 6 lines, with the syllable count as follows: 3,5,3,3, 7, 5, which is one stanza. You may have as many stanzas as you want, keeping to the same syllable count throughout. It is not necessary to rhyme.

So, this first one I did as Shadorma. The second one is just free-verse, as I tried to capture the emotions and feelings of a relationship.

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O MY LOVE

Crescendo

Emotional high

Crashing down

Death calls you

Leave me with only your Ghost

Diminuendo

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OUR SONG

Young love, you and I

Musical high

Heartbeats in tune

Kiss under the moon

Crescendo

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Together forever

Forever together

Though years have begun to fade

Sweet memories we have made

Dimineundo

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You went home before me

O how can this be

I’ve endured this much too long

Tonight my love, tonight my dear

I’ll join you in our song

Dal Niente

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© 2015 BS

WE ARE THE STARS

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WE ARE THE STARS

Change your position

Reverse your opinion

Come together, in this…our dimension

Meditate on perfect solution

We will survive our revolution

Reflect…revise to unify

Our souls never again to die

We are satellites in retrograde

Our future together was heavenly made

Our echoes will vibrate in celestial light

Our stars aligned again, this night.

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Resounding

Echoes

Vibrate

Energy

Rays

Beyond

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