2 in 1 – Unfinished
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Here’s a poem I wrote back in 2015. I was trying something different by having the couplets divided by words opposite of what the main poem was saying.
UNFINISHED
Quietly, quietly drift the clouds
Far above Earth’s rowdy crowds
THUNDER
Parading stately across the sky
Painting paradise in our eye
CRASHES
Take a moment to gaze above
Fill your senses with peace and love
LIGHTNING
Imagine floating without a care
Our mortal souls are free up there
FLASHES
Beauty does our eyes behold
Orange, pink, and nature’s gold
WIND
Sunrise, sunset, and in between
Starry nights, a moonlit gleam
GNASHES
Dream along, embracing peace
Praying for all war to cease
ANGER
Pure air inhale, life’s true incense
Live and love your truth…intense…
LASHES
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Thanks for visiting! Peace ☮️
© 2015 – re-posted 2022 BS
Beautiful poem Barbra
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Thanks so much, Sadje! 🌷
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You’re most welcome
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Very well done. XO
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Thanks so much, Ellen! 🌷
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