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https://cheerpeppers.wordpress.com/2016/09/07/why-blog-everyday-in-november/
https://dailypost.wordpress.com/prompts/atmospheric/
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Combining NanoPoblano – Day 18, with the Daily Prompt – Atmospheric
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REVIVAL
A nagging pain, like cotton wool, muffles my thoughts
My head hurts, just need to close my eyes
Maybe a breath of fresh, fall air will ease my senses
Sunny, mid-morning yellow, surrounded by cool, blue skies
Listening to the silence of the falling leaves
One, two, three, then more
They touch me like soft butterflies
Raining down in golden drops of autumn
A crispy carpet at my feet, I smile as I hear my cat
Pouncing and leaping to catch the falling curiosities
My tree laughs and smiles, as a soft breeze tickles her branches
She shakes herself, releasing her finery for us to enjoy
We have nothing to fear, as winter comes near…
Her words are felt in my soul
As I open my eyes, looking upward,
I am thankful for this gorgeous fall day,
And find my pain gone away
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Note: I wrote this poem back in 2014. I’d had a bad headache, and I think the wonderful fall day atmosphere really revived me.
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Thanks for visiting! Peace }i{
© 2017 BS
what a pretty poem
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Thank you so much! 🙂
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Lovely poetry, Barbara!
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Lovely word pictures that appeal to the senses. Great writing.
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