CLARITY
Stars speak of lonliness
Aloneness
A spark to ignite the night
Light
Stars speak in constellations
Elations
Look up to find the answers
Answers
Stars echo in solidarity
Clarity
Among the vast unknown
Shown
Stars will guide the way
Way
You are not alone
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For dVerse Poets – Quadrille 32
Prompt word – use the word ‘echo’ in your poem of only 44 words
Thanks for hosting the Q44, De! 🙂
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I love the echo in this, and the rhymes. Wonderful.
Thank you, De! 🙂
Such a mystical feel to this, Barbara. There are many kinds of stars if we but take the time to notice
Thanks, Victoria! You are right, many kinds of stars go un-noticed, yet should be. 🙂
I like how you started with stars and loneliness to end up with stars and not being alone.
Thank you, Frank! I was hoping it would turn out that way. 🙂
Indeed, the stars will guide us..
Thank you< Bjorn! I believe it is so, even from the earliest days of stargazing. 🙂
Fabulous progression to give the echo effect, Barbara! There’s wisdom in clarity! A wise work here!
Thank you, Walter! I do love the form of echo poetry, If we can find a few answers to our questions by contemplating the stars, then we all should do more looking above. 🙂
I agree!
Beautiful, Barbara. What a unique form and you pulled it off magnificently. 😀
Thank you, Diana! Echo poetry is fun to write, and if I can make it a bit mysterious, then all the better.
Such a wonderfully ethereal vibe to this, Barbara ❤️
Thank you, Sanaa! You know me well, and how I like to turn poems into the otherworldly. 🙂
Beautiful! I feel the same when looking up at the stars!
Thank you, Morgaine! I feel a need to look up at the night sky and the stars. I was thinking how people were guided by the stars when sailing the seas.
I like the clarity of it, but the solidarity speaks louder to me. They are there and speak still of their existence and ours. Thanks for the picture
I believe you are right. The stars and planets have been there for eons, all working together telling the story of the universe. Each and every soul will continue to shine on, in whatever form that may be, and I hope in solidarity and peace with others. So much to think about. …Glad you liked the picture! 🙂
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Stars certainly speak a lot! Beautiful poem!
Thank you so much! 🙂