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HIS HANDS
His hands are only in my memory, now
I see them in my mind’s eye, and how
I held them in my own, on that last day.
Strong and rough, yet the look
In his eyes, meeting great-grandkids, it took
His breath away.
Watching his hands, so much like my own,
As schoolwork was explained at home;
The times our fears he’d allay.
The clean smell of his lotion, his soap, and his hope,
He used to scrub the work-a-day toil, and to cope
With his daughter’s begging to play.
My mother in heaven, and we girls that last day,
Clasped our hands, with him… we did pray.
Now, I see my hands, and with me he’ll always be near.
Let the memories of his hands come, to always hold dear…
This way.
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© 2016
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For dVerse Poets Pub – Poetics – with host Mish…”Can You Give Me a Hand”…prompt word = Hands
Poetics – Can You Give Me a Hand?
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I love everything about this! Truly touching.
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Thank you so much, Kelly.
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“Let the memories of his hands come, to always hold dear…this way.” Oh Lord.. amen ❤
Beautifully penned 🙂
Lots of love,
Sanaa
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Thank you so much, Sanaa. xo
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It is interesting how the hands of our loved ones become so significant to us, even as they pass. Your poem is full of sweet memories. A beautiful response to the prompt.
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Thank you so much, Mish! As we go about living our lives, we don’t think much about how hands do so much. When those hands you’ve loved are no longer there, that’s when it hits you, and the memories come flooding in. Thanks for a wonderful prompt to get me to think.
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Beautifully tender, Barbara, as you describe your father’s hands on that last day…and just the memories of his smell and how he touched your life. I can feel your love.
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Thank you so much, Gayle. So many years of memories to recall, especially the last one. Thanks for your thoughts.
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This is so strong.. i like how you see his hands in yours… we are so connected backwards through our hands… great use of senses here.
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Thank you so much, Bjorn. We are, aren’t we…connected to all the people in our immediate family, going all the way back to our ancestors. The resemblance is definitely there. I appreciate your thoughts.
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Beautiful memories of the loved one’s hands ~ This part particularly struck me:
Now, I see my hands, and with me he’ll always be near.
Let the memories of his hands come, to always hold dear…
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Thank you so much, Grace. It is true, isn’t it, how we carry on living, when our loved ones pass on, to continue with such similarities throughout our family’s history.
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Very touching
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Thank you so much, Sabio. I’m happy you chose to visit here, and for your lovely thoughts.
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A tender tribute laced with memories and heart!
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Thank you so much, Walt! I appreciate your thoughts, and your visit here. Sometimes that’s all we are left with, the memories.
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I love this, SO much:
“The clean smell of his lotion, his soap, and his hope”
Just wonderful.
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Thank you so much, De! That smell I can conjure up in my mind, still today. Glad you enjoyed this, and I so appreciate your thoughts.
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Beautiful poem,Barbara! ☺ Both of us described the hands by a very similar way. Your tribute is touching.
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Thank you so much, Majka. I’ve read your tribute to your granny, and it is so moving. Thank you for your thoughts.
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You are most welcome, Barbara! ☺ My pleasure.
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A well composed and poignant poem.
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Thank you so much, Shirley! I’m happy you enjoyed this one, and I appreciate your lovely thoughts.
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So very heartfelt and touching. Hands so much like your own…that tells a story all by itself.
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Thank you so much, Victoria! Glad you enjoyed this one. 🙂
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Interesting.. now that i think
about it.. and really
feel it i see
my Mother’s
and Father’s
hands iN miNd
almost clearer than
tHeir faces.. true the
hands say and feel
so much
of REAL..
when free
to talk and feel..
My Father’s hands
strong with little
feeling..
My mother’s
hands all feelings..
a balance of both
i suppose is what
makes heroes real..:)
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Hi, Katiemia! It’s funny how that happens, how we carry on a little bit of every generation of our relatives in ourselves, even now. We are a unique blend of them all. 🙂
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SMiLes.. A bouquet oF uS..:)!
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Oh, what a wonderful way to say this, Katiemia!
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